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I can't escape this hell.
I've looked back on all the times
You were there
I have one last dare.

So what if I can
Give up everything for you
Somebody shake me from this dream
Wake me up from this nightmare.

These dragging, burning, purging
Grasping, eating, lying,
Rotting, violating, destroying,
Hands deserve nothing worse than what they get.

I've given myself to something
Far worse than Death itself.
It's worse than Living
It's called Love.

Stay torn in two
Be yourself
Escape the mentality
All is a lie.

When confusion sets in,
People say you should just die.
I don't see myself
Like you see me.

No one will ever change the way
I beat bloody fists
Against heaven's walls
While the angels laugh at me.

The rage it all comes out
When fear shows itself.
The darkest side of myself is the part you see.
So, I ask this: Why do you love me?
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My heart on paper... sometimes I wish life was in black and white. Too bad there's so much red thrown in along with greys.
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:iconprinceoffire:
PrinceOfFire Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
let it all out.
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2dazed Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2008  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
If there were any of your words I'd back 100%, it'd be these my old friend. You speak so true.
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:iconxero-sama:
xero-sama Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2008  Professional Digital Artist
:blushes: Thanks Christie. How are you dear?
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:icon2dazed:
2dazed Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2008  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
I'm good. Trying to get another Contest off the ground that unites everyone behind one flag. We gotLucien a tree swing & he loves it. Can you believe he'll be 2 on 8/3!? Time flies. How are you?
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xero-sama Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2008  Professional Digital Artist
Wow... 2 already? Dang... And I'm good. Dating another girl who lives in Monroe :D
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:icon2dazed:
2dazed Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2008  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Monroe is a long way from here, sort of. 4-5 hrs I think. We go near there when we go to Tx.
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xero-sama Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2008  Professional Digital Artist
3.5 to me :D
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kayandjay100 Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:iconroseplz: Coco
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:iconxero-sama:
xero-sama Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2008  Professional Digital Artist
:)
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Siraea Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2008
:hug: :hug: :hug:
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